Tuesday, 6 October 2015

Week 5: Refining Poster







Week 5: Tuesday

In Studio we went through what we needed for Hand-in next week.
Other wise Genevieve and I worked further on the brochure, poster, app and website.
Each individual process is documented in separated blog post for this week.

Monday, 5 October 2015

Week 5: Monday

Crit with Phoebe:


Brochure:
  • Yes to yellow in titles, just not so much. 
  • Push the composition - try other alternatives and layouts
  • Cut out all text that isn't needed - ph. w. (etc). 
  • Maybe make kid double page spread - too busy atm. 

Poster:
  • Remove roof - watch negative space. 
  • Add time and date.
  • Reword body copy. 

Website:
  • Needs better grid - isn't working - jumping around. 
  • Not fully understanding narrative at the bottom. 
  • Visual style does match brochure and poster so far.
  • Website is weakest atm - needs most work. 

App:
  • Needs more work on it. 
  • Speech bubble thing of profile is too small.