Crit with Phoebe:
Brochure:
- Yes to yellow in titles, just not so much.
- Push the composition - try other alternatives and layouts
- Cut out all text that isn't needed - ph. w. (etc).
- Maybe make kid double page spread - too busy atm.
Poster:
- Remove roof - watch negative space.
- Add time and date.
- Reword body copy.
Website:
- Needs better grid - isn't working - jumping around.
- Not fully understanding narrative at the bottom.
- Visual style does match brochure and poster so far.
- Website is weakest atm - needs most work.
App:
- Needs more work on it.
- Speech bubble thing of profile is too small.
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